Second Edit Music Promo -

Second Edit - 

After receiving feedback from my focus group, I created a second edit applying the feedback I was given. I have tried to make the shots shorter and add variation to make it more interesting and keep the audience engaged. I also added some more shots of the argument in the hope that it made the narrative more clear.

Feedback - 

• "The edit on the first record player shots is a bit choppy and disjointed."

• "The second lemon shot moves too fast so I can't really see whats going on."

• "The second lemon sucking shot also moves too fast and too much, maybe use the same effect but slower."

• "You could use a variety of more effects to make it more interesting and maybe play with the colours to make it link to your other products."