First Complete Edit -

First Complete Edit - 

This is my first completed draft of my music promo. I have been editing using Adobe Premiere Pro and trying out slowing down, speeding up and reversing shots in order to make it more exciting. After completing my first edit I showed it to my focus group and got some feedback to help me improve.

Feedback - 

• "The lemon shots are too long, maybe add more movement by changing the pace of the shots and repeating them in reverse or add some effects."

• "The timing on some of the shots of the band are off and are not believable."

• "Some of the shots of the singer are too long and flat and make the music video a bit dull."

• "The shots of the record player are too long. Maybe try speeding it up and adding some effects."

• "You could add some more shots of the argument so that the story line is more clear and you can tell that they are falling out of love."