First Edit (Music Promo) -

First Edit -

Here is a first edit of my music video. To edit I have been using Adobe Premiere Pro. I have cut the shots down to the correct length and placed them in the correct order. I have not filled in all of the shots as they are not all filmed and cut properly.

Feedback - 

• ·      Plot is not clear

Our target audience thought that the plot was difficult to follow and made the music video as a whole confusing. To over come this problem we will rethink our plot and change our ideas to make the music video easier to follow. We could do this by changing our idea to become less narrative and more concept and performance based.

• ·      Too many locations

We were told that we had too many locations which made it difficult to follow and understand the narrative as they locations kept changing. The locations were not always relevant to what was happening in the music video and didn't link up to the narrative.

• ·      Too much smoking

   We were told that there was too much focus on the smoking and it didn't create the atmosphere intended. Although it was used in some of our RMA's the context and locations were different and so the meaning was not the same.

• ·      Performance is lacking

The performance aspects of our music video are good but there isn't enough of it. Also there is only performance from the singer and not the band as a whole.