First Draft Storyboard -

Storyboard First Draft - 

 This is our first draft for our storyboard of our music video. We showed it to one of our media teachers who gave us feedback in order to improve it. 

The feedback we were given was - 

• Make it clear that the girl was an ex-girlfriend. We could do this by adding a shot of the main character holding a photograph of him and the girl and ripping it up.
• Make the use of drug more ambiguous so that it doesn't cause offence or is seen as unacceptable. We could do this by adding effects to a shot of the male singer during the editing process. This would make it seem as though he is out of it without directly implying he is taking drugs.